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After reading this case study we have come to the point that jot financial position is very well especially when looking at its 5 year plan the revenue is increasing along with its sales. However there are some ethical issues especially like JOT is not applying CE stands for certified experts which we are reject it, to us the main reason JOT is not using it is because of it might decrease its sales especially its sophisticated toys like spaceships whish had many incidents reported ,marking CE means adding more investment and jot already is on  heavy loan beside its sales and profit also increasing year by year. Technologies and research should be done side by side with knowing the long side competition .As a suggestion which I suggest to JOT is to be brave and ask its retailers or its 7 main sellers of its toys to make early payment as by reading the case study it should of 60 days delayed time of payment this might also decrease its payment to raw material suppliers and  one step backwards in paying loans other then this JOT  hasn’t realized that it might be losing money with this much delay for example like inflation being increased 1$ value will be inferior after some days then today , not only that by getting payment early and keeping it in account JOT could actually have some more money with interest rates .I myself did a little internship in bank while over there I found out the universities getting a lot of money added after their students submitted their fees with interest added after being submitted. The flying spaceship fault to us is not the fault of the designer as the product was good but a little research like this could e good especially like having improved insulation before it was launched. They should more focus on testing its product before it is launched , on specific group of customers just like sampling to getting aware of problems and likes and dislikes regarding the product  .If the product after conducting a survey shows the increase interest of customers in this spaceship then they should definitely invest on it to improve it. Also they should focus on their literature ,according to us it should be small and precise and more informative rather nowadays there is still that old tradition going on sending a lot of pages literature along with a lot of writing , honestly most of the people don't read that full writing  literature regarding the product  beside this there should be only  small and only minimal literature like 5 to 6 sentences like telling how to operate it . The idea of Alana regarding  introducing smart phone application for 9-11 yr age group is really cool and informative , John Grun should definitely go for ,why be shy then go for this line although he is right  that it is a whole new segment but it is a guarantee product which will definitely succeed  like everyone is getting high tech with passage of years and already mentioning in the case study of more sophisticated products for this age group especially linking it with internet  is  go signal from us ,financially to worry about this is good but there are few option cutting down small portion of their pay for a time period ,from gross profit and what about that those shares being listed in stock exchange with having no dividend getting out and as a private company listed they should sell small portions of their shares for time period or create more shares instead of dividend to give. The problem regarding late delivery of Christmas product is sincerely a big head ache at this near time while this point sale has more sale then the year other quarters. Michael should let Gull to sell 75% of the products because at this point it would be pretty hard to find any other supplier and to make arrangements regarding companies interest and policies with that of supplier interest it's just like doing a blind love marriage . Boris has a right to be unimpressed by this situation and they should

do the same thing as he told regarding canceling the supplier  contract but this is december sale like I meant Christmas which means more sales if JOT cancels its contract right now with Gull then they would not only have a high risk of losing not only sales but customers too , as it is said customer is the boss .The potential customers might switch to other company which will decrease company sale and its reputation. This also is a ethical issue  Gull had made its contract with JOT  so  no matter what it should have fulfilled it seriously .After reading this sentence that Gull is rumored to be prioritizing high margin orders  made me think that this guy can change its mind like a n arrow changing its direction when offered high money sorry to say but that's my perception only .On the other hand it is also written rumored  this means its still not confirmed so as a operational director Michael Warner should have a brief talk with Gull getting a knowing of the problems he is facing in the phase while selling  JOT'S products .Dialogue should be given preference at this time until at a point by having some compromise made by both of the parties. By the way looking at the unethical way I was thinking of bribing Gull if he is facing some financial problems so that he could at least deliver our product's on time . Looking at the prospectus of near shoring in Voldania is a nice preference .First of all  looking at the wage rates China wage rates are inflating at a more high speed then  that of Voldania  like compare 12% of China wage rate to that of Voldania which is 2% .I we do some calculations we can see that initially China's wage rate would still be lower then  Voldania's for some years . like this:-China wage rate after a year would be 1.75 pound multiply it with inflation rate per year which is 12%  and then add it again to 1.75 . The answer would be 1.96 pound. In Voldania the wage rate after a year would be 5 pound multiply it to its wage rate per year which is 2 % then again add it with 5 pound the answer would be 5.1 pound still higher then China's wage rate . This wage rate would higher for some years and would definitely make China wage rate to increase in compare with Voldania's wage rate. But looking at the distribution cost ,and production especially keeping in mind  the increasing cost of crude oil Voldania is the better option to choose opt for .The factor which I have in my mind is enough for me to say this decision to be better is incident cost there might be some case when GOD  forbid the transportation plane ,car might and in a disaster .What if the plane is ready to deliver the material to the company but  it is not flying due to bad weather .What about theft if using the means of land transports like tucks passing through areas might pose a high risk of being robbed .The most important cost is that of  time .Is the company willing to sacrifice its time for short term labor minimal charges .Delay in time might divert the  customers especially customers who are like problem child or cash cow if you understand what I mean to say.  Other then that to me Jot should also do spend some budget in advertising its toys affiliating its toys with charity organized events like telethon to help children summing funds to help them .They also introduce stuff toys which are also well appreciated all across the world especially with girls like my relative and friends house their rooms with bunch of stuff toys. Stuff toys are not for specified age like  3-5 or 5-9 its has a longer limit even toys like smart phones apps which are originally introduced for 9-11 years old age group but still many adults use it although their age is such that they should not use it. There should more focus on it seriously because these groups only sound great in theory but in practical it is way too different its like a whole new market ready to be explored .Man adults want to use small children or under age children toys but they are shy to use it because people will make fun of them due to the prescribed age limit on the toy.